…and it wasn't…terrible…exactly?
story has promise. the author's thoughts that have been included do make it a bit of a struggle, Too many "familiar charactor/actors names" but look forward to reading more.
would have given it more stars if the story line had had more fluidity.
The "author's thoughts" were me padding word count with stream of conciousness crap because I'd hit a roadblock, but still needed to forge ahead. chortling
Looks like I need to revisit Tomahawk Jackson, The Early Years again.
And, because someone will wonder, even if they don't ask…
http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/251571
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Smashwords — The Adventures of Tomahawk Jackson – The Early Years — A book by Jonathon Barton
A restless Iowa farmgirl becomes America’s First Astronaut. Because Space Nazis.
That is very cool!